Irretrievably broken, you name it and those have been my thoughts today while revising my novel. It could have possibly been salvaged if it read: crap, crap, crappy crap.. No need for ambien just read this! Action? None of that needed in this snooze fest. Care for me to read it to you in a monotone? So, the question remains. Scratch it or save it? It’s looking like a total scratch at this point.